Friday, March 7, 2008

Poetry

I thought that each one of these poems had something that was different and unique about each one of them. I thought that the first one “How do I love thee?” was very repetitive. I thought that it stopped kind of abruptly at the end. On the other hand I really liked that second story “The Tally Stick” was very descriptive, this in my opinion made the story really good. These are the two stories that stuck out in my eye as the best of the ones that we read this week. The other ones on the list in my opinion just didn’t to anything for me or they were kind of hard for me to follow. The one that I thought was hard to follow was, “On her loving two equally”. I had a hard time keeping the people straight, the wording was confusing and the overall way the poem was printed in my opinion just did not work for me for some reason. Another story that I liked was “Wedding-Ring” it was touching but, in my opinion again the format was kind of crazy. Why, would a writer write a poem with most of the lines on the left margin and then after four or five lines all of the sudden change margins and then go back after just a couple of words? I didn’t see the purpose to that at all.

1 comment:

Erinn said...

Lauren,
I like how your response comments on the styles of the poems. In poetry, how the poem looks on the page is equally important as to what the words mean. You raise some interesting points: (1) That Browning's poem is repetitive. I agree with you; I wonder how you see the repetition working/not working in this poem. WHat do you think the purpose of such repetitive phrases serves? (2) You mention that "Wedding-Ring" uses some odd line formatting. What effect do these lines have? How does such use of lines emphasize certain words/ideas?

I encourage you to look around for other forms of poetry that interest/surprise/confuse you. It could be fun to look at these different formats and determine what effect the form of the poem has on the way it is perceived by the reader.